Almost Done

A few more edits to make, and I’ll feel comfortable writing the dramatic final scene.

This story has changed so much since draft one.  Characters actually develop in this version.  It’s a riot.

But that means that I have to make sure the characters are ready to do what has to be done in the final scene.  And if they’re not, I must further condition them.

Also my voice has changed entirely.  Draft one was written like a folktale.  Which makes sense because it was largely based on a Welsh tale.  But with the changes that have occurred, I thought it best to write in a grittier voice (with swearing and stuff).

No longer is this story appropriate for children.


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